Posts tagged as:

Too

Too Much Advertising Letter

by emily on May 8, 2012

123 Lane, Area 456,

City, State, Pin Code
February 11, 2012
[Mention Address of Recipient]

Hello,

As a regular reader of your [newspaper/magazine], I would like to mention that your [newspaper/magazine] has way too much of advertisements! I have been noticing this from long time now and I counted the pages lately and there were more pages of ads than there were of articles! I was very disappointed and couldn’t believe that, so I did it again few days back and found out the same result. I am aware that advertisements pay your bills, but don’t you think you’re getting just a little carried away? I don’t read a [newspaper/magazine] to get a frenziedly sales pitch. I would suggest you to control the ads a little, or run an issue or few pages with no advertising for your readers.

 

Thanking you in advance for considering.

Warm Regards,

Bob Travolta

encl: [List of enclosed items goes here]

Download Too Much Advertising Letter In Word Format

{ 0 comments }

Too Many Big Words Letter

by emily on May 7, 2012

123 Lane, Area 456, City, State, Pin Code
February 9, 2012
[Mention Address of the Recipient]

Hey,

As I am a regular reader of your [newspaper/magazine] I would like to suggest you to minimize too many big words in your publication as they have grown big time. Words like “geographic,” “ambassador” and “terrorism” are bit too much for an ordinary mind to handle all at once, and they can cause brain damage. This is a proven scientific fact. In the future, I would welcome if you tried to write your articles so that average people who didn’t graduate from college could understand. I’m sure your many readers would thank you for it.

Kind Regards!

Sean Peterson

Encl: [List of enclosed items goes here]

Download Too Many Big Words Letter In Word Format

{ 0 comments }